‘Thin Ice’ (TV)

‘THIN ICE’

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Victorian Frost Fair with the Twelfth Doctor and Bill

Okay! First of all, I need to protest! The ‘Doctor Who’ production team can’t use ‘Thin Ice’ as a title for a television episode. It has already been used for the Seventh Doctor audio story called ‘Thin Ice’.

Couldn’t they have given the episode another title such as ‘Thin Frost’ or something like that? Otherwise, this episode has been enjoyable to watch and it feels a lot better after a second viewing.

The episode picks up from where we left off in the previous one ‘Smile’, where the Doctor and Bill saw an elephant coming towards them in London. It was also snowing with the Thames frozen over.

These oddities get answered. The episode sees the Twelfth Doctor and Bill on a new adventure in Regency London in 1814. So, this is nice. After a futuristic adventure, it’s now time for an historical adventure.

The Doctor and Bill attend a frost fair. Wait! Hang on! This sounds familiar. Has the Doctor been here before? Oh! Yes! Apparently, he has. He was at the very same frost fair when he was the First Doctor.

That was in the Big Finish audio story ‘Frostfire’, and he had Vicki and Steven with him. In the new TV series, the Eleventh Doctor took River Song to the same fair, according to ‘A Good Man Goes To War’.

In this story, the Doctor and Bill enjoy themselves in their Regency gear, exploring the frost fair. I liked seeing the Doctor and Bill in Victorian clothes; looking very grand, posh and almost aristocratic.

I enjoyed it when Bill asked the Doctor questions about the dangers of walking in the past. The questions asked have echoes of when Martha asked them to the Tenth Doctor in ‘The Shakespeare Code’.

I also liked it when the Doctor and Bill seemed to be having fun exploring the frost fair and partaking in its various activities. The Doctor is clearly relishing seeing Bill enjoying herself about the frost fair.

However, the Doctor and Bill soon discover that there’s this mysterious alien-like sea creature underneath the frozen Thames in London. This creates a big mystery for the Doctor and Bill to solve.

They have to find out how a gigantic sea creature got underneath the Thames in the first place. This soon leads them to meeting up with the villainous Sutcliffe, who is responsible for the sea monster.

By the way, this episode is by Sarah Dollard. Sarah previously contributed to Series 9 of ‘Doctor Who’ in the episode ‘Face the Raven’. I found ‘Thin Ice’ to be a better episode than ‘Face the Raven’.

Mind you, on first viewing, I found it fairly okay. I enjoyed the historical setting of Regency London, but the tale fell rather flat for me. It wasn’t very exciting enough, as it could have been when I l first saw it.

Having seen it again though, I enjoyed it more and appreciated the dynamic of the Twelfth Doctor and Bill in their character development and their relationship. However, I wouldn’t rate this as a superb classic tale.

It’s a shame, as Sarah Dollard does deliver some intriguing concepts for this episode as well as in ‘Face the Raven’. But I feel there’s something lacking from it, as the concepts don’t feel fleshed out enough.

For one thing, it didn’t seem like the people at the frost fair were freezing cold, as they should have been. Everyone takes it in their stride attending the frost fair, making it feel less historically accurate.

There was one gripping scene that I enjoyed in this episode and it’s when the Doctor and Bill go down in diving suits underneath the Thames. It was scary and eerie to see it, especially when they’re underwater.

The scene put me in mind of the ‘Doctor Who’ book story ‘Empire of Death’, where characters, including the Fifth Doctor, went underwater in diving suits. I wonder how Sarah Dollard gained her inspiration for this episode.

Peter Capaldi and Pearl Mackie are reasonably good in the episode. I enjoyed those scenes where Bill is challenging the Doctor on his morals when something terrible happened in the episode.

This was when Austin Taylor as Spider, who stole the Doctor’s sonic screwdriver, got sucked into the frozen Thames by the sea creature underneath. I found it daring of Sarah Dollard to include that scene here.

Bill questions the Doctor about whether he had killed anyone in his life. The Doctor eventually tells Bill that he did, but insists that he ‘moved on’. It’s something Bill struggles to comprehend in this story.

At this point, Bill is growing on me as a ‘Doctor Who’ companion. She works well alongside the Twelfth Doctor in the new TV series, especially in identifying the good sides of his personality as well as the bad.

I did wonder though whether we should have four-part adventures back on our TV screens by this point. I seem to enjoy four-part adventures more than I enjoy single hour episodes in ‘Doctor Who’.

The reason why I bring this up is because we didn’t get to see enough of the monster in full form on TV. Having ‘Thin Ice’ as a longer two-parter could have helped to allow us to see more of the creature.

There was a lot to take in and there weren’t that many action-packed sequences for us to enjoy. I had expected the massive sea creature to come bursting out from the Thames to attack London city.

The monster did seem to be underused a lot in the episode and you can clearly see it’s a CGI creation. I wouldn’t mind this so much, but the monster could have at least provided a threat in this story.

Also, where did this sea creature come from? It’s not clear whether it’s an outer-space alien or a native being like a Silurian. I don’t think it’s properly explained. Was there an explanation for it here?

THE UNBOUND NINTH DOCTOR (COFD): I’ll explain later!

(scoffs) Oh well, that makes perfect sense. Trust me, you might see Rowan Atkinson’s Doctor pop up once and while in my Series 10 reviews. It occurs when something’s not explained at all in the series.

The villain for this episode is Nicholas Burns as Lord Sutcliffe, a Victorian businessman who purchased the sea creature. He’s that person who placed the sea creature underneath the Thames.

And I found Sutcliffe wasted in this episode. Oh, Nicholas Burns does a fine portrayal of the character, no doubt about that. But again, like the monster, we don’t see enough of him in the story.

He appears rather late in the second half of the episode. There does seem to be this build-up to the reveal of the villain’s identity, yet there wasn’t enough time for us to appreciate his own villainy.

The story focused a lot on the Doctor and Bill’s characters before we get to the heart of the matter with the villain. Not that I’d mind a focus on our main stars. We are supposed to like them, of course.

But again, had ‘Thin Ice’ been longer and there was more time spent on the villain’s plans as well as the monster in two episodes, this could have been a great story. So, that’s a missed opportunity here.

It was suggested to me that there could’ve been more in Sarah Dollard’s script that was cut out in the episode’s final edit. I hoped that’d be the case when we came to the deleted scenes on the DVD.

However, when I checked the DVD box set to see the deleted scenes from Series 10 of ‘Doctor Who’, there was only one deleted scene for ‘Thin Ice’. And it didn’t develop Sutcliffe’s character. I just…No!

I mean, Sutcliffe’s plan is to see the people at the London frost fair being fed to the sea creature to increase his own power and wealth. Okay. Um… why would Sutcliffe want to do such a nasty thing?!

THE UNBOUND NINTH DOCTOR (COFD): I’ll explain later!

(unconvinced) Right. (Pause) It would’ve been nice to have seen more of Sutcliffe’s character in this episode and also see him developed further as he seemed to have potential. Sadly, that wasn’t to be.

However, there is a superb scene in the episode. The Doctor punches Sutcliffe, as Sutcliffe seemed racist towards Bill. It’s a pretty good scene and a defining moment for Peter Capaldi’s Doctor to defend Bill.

The episode also features Asiatu Koroma as Kitty, Ellie Shenker as little Dottie, Kishaina Thiruselvan as Harriet and Badger Skelton as Perry. These urchin children help the Doctor and Bill in the episode.

This is when the Doctor and Bill are trying to evacuate everyone out of the frost fair area before Sutcliffe unleashes his diabolical plan. The urchin children assist in evacuating everyone out of there.

Thankfully, the Doctor uses his sonic screwdriver in order to free the sea creature out from the trap it’s in, breaking the ice in the Thames. Sutcliffe also gets his just desserts when he falls into the river.

The four urchin children that helped the Doctor and Bill are rewarded when the TARDIS duo invite them to Sutcliffe’s house. They have a meal and the Doctor also gives the house ownership to Perry.

The Doctor and Bill eventually return to the present day, back in the Doctor’s office at St. Luke’s University. Matt Lucas makes a small appearance as Nardole, when bringing in cups of tea at the end.

Nardole is pretty annoyed with the Doctor for breaking his ‘oath’. I became curious as to what was inside the vault that the Doctor is supposed to be protecting. Was it dangerous? Is it very significant?

‘Thin Ice’ is pretty average as a ‘Doctor Who’ story goes. There was a lot to take in and I don’t think the sea creature and the villainous Sutcliffe were fleshed out enough. But the story is decent enough.

The DVD/Blu-ray special features for this episode are as follows. There’s the ‘Thin Ice’ – Inside Look’ behind-the-scenes featurette. There’s also the ‘Doctor Who: The Fan Show – The Aftershow’ edition for ‘Thin Ice’.

‘Thin Ice’ rating – 7/10


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4 thoughts on “‘Thin Ice’ (TV)

  1. Timelord 007's avatarTimelord 007

    The Doctor punching Sutcliffe & the diving sequence were the best thing about the episode but i sense Sarah’s script wasn’t allowed to flow as she originally wrote it, loved to see what Chibnall made of this material because the elements are there just badly executed.

    Again Tim you summed up this episode perfectly.

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    1. Tim Bradley's avatarTim Bradley Post author

      Hi Simon.

      Glad you enjoyed how I summed up this episode.

      Yeah the Doctor punching Sutcliffe and the diving sequence stuff are great in the episode. I also enjoyed it when the Doctor and Bill enjoyed themselves at the frost fair. But again, I do find certain aspects of the episode like Sutcliffe as the villain and the sea monsters not properly developed or fleshed out enough. I agree, Sarah Dollard’s script could’ve had scenes cut out in the scripting process. I hope there’ll be a Target novelization of ‘Thin Ice’ for Sarah Dollard to have an opportunity to flesh out the story more. I would welcome that.

      Thanks for your comments.

      Tim. 🙂

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  2. A F J Kernow's avatarA F J Kernow

    I love this story. Right from the continued cliffhanger of the elephant at the start. It’s cheeky, thought-provoking and has some really interesting Doctor and companion conversations.

    Bill’s enthusiasm at seeing real history is wonderful. I do hope Pearl Mackie returns to do some audio, Bill is my favourite Nu Who companion after Donna and Martha. I don’t know why. I think it‘s way she challenges the Doctor, her empathy, her wide-eyed wonder at the Universe and her funny banter.

    Peter Capaldi is at the height of his powers in Series Ten. He changes from twinkly-eyed comedy to righteous anger on a dime and it doesn’t jar. The decision to have him play the lecturer to Bill’s student works so well.

    The Frost Fair itself is beautifully realised. The costumes, the acrobats, food stalls and livestock mean there’s constant interest for the viewer and the creature under the Thames is fascinating.
    Sarah Dollard’s script is a blast, for me it rattles along nicely, there are some good points made and the theme that the decisions and actions of one person can affect many, is well-explored. The impact and implications of the Doctor’s actions throughout his lives are discussed here in a intriguing manner. We see both the Doctor’s alienness and his humanity.

    I do agree this would have made a great two parter so Sutcliffe could be developed more as a character. There are aspects that are skated over(!) which you highlight in your review. Overall it’s a great story that could have been superb. I would like to see more from this imaginative writer.

    One little aside, I liked it so much I wrote a diary for Bill that gave her perspective on the events of the story. I must dig it out.

    Great review as always, Tim.

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    1. Tim Bradley's avatarTim Bradley Post author

      Hi Tony,

      Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the TV episode ‘Thin Ice’ with the Twelfth Doctor and Bill. Glad you love this ‘Doctor Who’ story. I hope Pearl Mackie will get to return to play Bill in the Big Finish audios of ‘Doctor Who’ too. I enjoyed writing Bill’s character in my ‘Zorbius’ story ‘The Saviour of the Daleks’ and recently in ‘The Thirteen+ Doctors’. Series 10 is Peter Capaldi’s strongest season as the Twelfth Doctor compared to Series 8 and 9 and his interaction with Bill Potts as his companion is very good throughout this season.

      I enjoyed seeing the frost fair in the episode and it was intriguing to see it compared to hearing it in the Big Finish audio story ‘Frostfire’ with Vicki, Steven and the First Doctor. I think Sarah Dollard’s script for ‘Thin Ice’ is better and well-realised than ‘Face the Raven’. A shame she only did two stories for the Peter Capaldi/Steven Moffat era.

      Yeah, it’s a shame that elements like Sutcliffe as a villain and the sea monster aren’t explored enough in the episode, but this is a decently enjoyable ‘Doctor Who’ story. I really hope that Sarah Dollard will have a chance to novelize ‘Thin Ice’ for the Target novelization range someday. Ooh, a diary for Bill Potts. I would like to see and read that sometime. Sounds very interesting.

      Many thanks for your comments. Glad you enjoyed my review on the ‘Thin Ice’ TV episode.

      Tim 🙂

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